Onizero's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Endless Storm]

I don't like it.

First off, it sounds like you recorded the vocals in your Grandma's basement and the overall sound of it is lacking. It's not very fast for a metal song and doesn't sound good enough to pull that off too effectively. I also don't like the beginning which sounds like the average song in the video game section. Please do better in the future...

Pure-Metal-UTA responds:

Lots of editing to this simple response.
1) I don't live at my grandmas, I live at my mom's because I'm still in high school.
2) There's plenty of slow metal songs such as A Tout le Monde, Moonshield, Gyroscope, etc.
3) You haven't given enough advice on how to "pull it off effectively"
4) Listen to the intro of Moonshield and Gyroscope both by In Flames, you'll see why I picked that.
Please give better reviews in the future...

[Body Lotion]

It's very chaotic.

It a very crazy offbeat flavor. Sadly some of the sounds get slightly repetitive and it doesn't change that much over the course of around 3 minutes. It just gets small doses of new sounds and occasionally loses the old ones. But it's good. I liked it. Good job.

cky12qxz responds:

Breakcore is very chaotic :D
The reason the synths are repetitive is because I didn't wanna over-do with so much synths.

[[ f ] Susano]

Feelin this'

Really liking the Asian feel that some of your songs have. Really appreciating your contribution to the Audio Portal. Keep it up.

flashmac responds:

No problem man. Thanks for listening

[Reciprocation]

It's not ambient...

It sounds like a slow hip-hop beat at best. Good job nonetheless.

T-Zero responds:

Ah, thanks for the review and the suggestion. I'm never quite sure what genre to place my music under.

[[ f ] Mystic Waves]

I like it!

Has an mystic (as said in the title) Asian feel. Good job. I like the flute by the way.

flashmac responds:

Thanks man

[Penndulum - [w.i.p]]

Sounds wipEout worthy...

I like it but the beginning I think needs some tweaking.

alcatraz5 responds:

I kinda Agree.

[SHORT flash-menu loop [SFPL]]

It has a creepy vibe...

It a pretty good menu song for a somewhat scary game I'm guessing. I can find anything wrong with it except it sounds a little weird when it starts over. But it's still a good song. Good job.

SFaPiL2 responds:

Yeah, now that you mentioned it, I notice that the loop doesn't connect well (it sounds different).

Thanks for the input and awesome score ^_^.

[[DK Z-U] My third song]

You call that ambient?

I would've given you an seven but obviously you don't know what type of music you created so that's a five. It's a not a good loop because it takes a second to start up. It would be better a short track.

Goupidan responds:

Then tell me what type it is :D

[The world awaits]

A fresh contribution to the AP.

I like it, it's different. And I like it's difference because it stands out from a lot of songs in this portal right now. Good job. I'd like to hear more tracks like this.

Syn311 responds:

Thank you.

[stark fast creek]

Yea..do that.

Make it longer...but right now it sounds good. Kind of a nice hip hop feel right now and I like that. PM me when you release a longer version.

pr0ded responds:

sure once i remember the project name