It's not good
The arms are quite short and make the girl getting hugged look awkward. This shit is so shiny Amuria & Ramy would be proud. Very weird torsos, etc. etc. Basically this isn't too good of a picture and coming straight out of /ic/ where they would have a field day with this picture I'm not feeling in the mood to asspat you like Suwako. If you want to improve your art hopefully you can understand where I'm coming from.