Onizero's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[just walking my octopus]

It's interesting.

First off, I find the page crease a little annoying but I guess that can't be helped assuming you drew that in your sketchbook. I find the wild style of cross hatching a little bit messy but it still works, amazingly.
My favorite feature of this drawing is the reaper drawing even though his robe is a little too baggy and makes him look a little fat/large, which is fine if that's what you were going for.
I'm fine with the octopus but I wish it was clearer to distinguish it's limbs since right now I mostly see a lot of suction cups and no creases between the legs of the non-visible side of the creature.
The background is nothing special but I do find myself liking the sky blue hue that you colored it with. Overall it's a good drawing that needs a little work that most people wouldn't be able to detect. Good job.
By the way, whats the thing to the side of the reaper's hood?

TreasurePlanet responds:

thank you so much for your in-depth critique. It's really appreciated.
What you said about the reaper's robes being to baggy was right on point and it brought my attention to things that i had not thought of.
I lost the octopus halfway through the sketch. It just got too messy and it was illegible. So i added a TON of suction cups in hopes that the viewer could tell what it was.

Once again, thanks so much for your critique.

-Joe

[Elika-full body]

Why do all your girl characters look like boys?

I think you need to learn how to draw faces. It has become painfully obvious as I look over your gallery that you have no idea how to make your characters look the least bit feminine. And let's not forget that they're all anime inspired rubbish. I've never seen a chubby girl with blue hair, so let's start making these characters half decent.
No offense.

HOLIMOUNT responds:

well if you say it iguess your rigth whit her but it was my actual intention of the character it self to look dudelish just for the heck of it just saying

[Mwah-]

Look at the effort.

How much time did you put into this, 10 minutes? This piece is the definition of basic. Spend some more time on your art. I don't come to the art portal to see stick figures in a bland background aiming a gun at me. Why would you submit this? Is it a joke that I don't know about? Jeez, I'm getting carried away. But overall just spend some more time and draw something original or something. And spend more than 10 minutes on it.

Catatonic27 responds:

Why thank you. Actually, this took me [embarrassingly] quite a bit longer then ten mins, due to the fact that I'm relativity new to the tools I'm using. :\

If you'll look at the rest of my art, simple and bland grays are about all you'll find. It's not a joke, it's just my style...But what you said is only an echo of what a ton of other people say.

Thanks for the input though!

[ManDark]

It's alright.

The face looks a little weird though. The nose is so long that it seems to be pushing the mouth into the chin. The hair is weird and looks unnatural. He looks feminine. And he has a pretty big forehead. The ear should be smaller and lower in relation to the eyes as well.
But hey, practice makes perfect?

sweetyluli responds:

Thanks for the Crit. I haven't done a lot of realism XD so it's good to know these things XD" It was originally gunna be a CGed painting, but I decided to take it alittle further XD Thats why things epsecially are off XD"

[Best Friends]

It's not good

The arms are quite short and make the girl getting hugged look awkward. This shit is so shiny Amuria & Ramy would be proud. Very weird torsos, etc. etc. Basically this isn't too good of a picture and coming straight out of /ic/ where they would have a field day with this picture I'm not feeling in the mood to asspat you like Suwako. If you want to improve your art hopefully you can understand where I'm coming from.

Tombstoned666 responds:

glad you like it,
and respect your elders!!!

[Nekid Perzpektive]

Hahaha

Dat ass.

[Experiment #4]

My favorite 'experiment.'

All the other are cool but this seems the most realistic of an experiment to me. I can see it slithering through a tropical jungle silently dragging it's torso along the ground. Then propelling itself into the air to attach its claws into the torso of it's prey and impaling the head of it with it's scorpion like tail.
But that's just me.

Actionsquid responds:

Haha! Neat! I don't put much thought into functionality or habits of each creature, so I like to see what others think.

[Superdeformed robot]

Love the concepts

But on the question I would either choose the middle top one or the bottom one.
The top one if he's good the bottom if he's evil. I love red but I have to say they way him look makes him look menacing. I like that.

[Hail of Madness!]

The spirit of madness is this picture.

This picture is great from the lighting to the perspective to the violence. If someone didn't know what madness was I would refer to this picture before showing them any of the movies. Good job.

[Black 'n Blue]

She's pretty but...

Why does she look like the gypsy from Dreamwork's Hunchback of Notre Dame (I forgot her name)?