Onizero's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[The Tards]

It looks like...

Something I'd see on an anti-drug ad, good job. Maybe you should add some color, more detail (unless you meant to keep it simple), and a background.

Booyaaa responds:

Yeh, I stuck with simple. I didnt know what to color them. Besides, if I did color them, and didnt like it, I would be screwed out of my original copy.

[Ninja Skull]

My goodness that's sexy...

It reminds me of the Jack Sparrow skull on Pirates of the Caribbean films. I like it, but wish you could make a zombie ninja with a body instead of a zombie ninja skull logo, good job though.

[Fairy?]

Mr. Fly-thing looks angry.

I really like your style, mostly the extreme exaggeration of basic emotions in the faces. I think you need to add some backgrounds though. But hell even I hate backgrounds, they sometimes take away from the character. Good job.

ZoulArt responds:

Thanks.
I never thought about adding backgrounds before.

[Dragonball AF]

Peace & Shoes

Yes I know those are the typical shoes for Dragon Ball Z but I think you should adapt them to you know the time...the world 200 years later should look different meaning the fashion an all. I don't see us wearing the collars and having queens and stuff like we did 2 centuries ago.
And like the guy who commented before me, the peace sign is WAY too generic.
But good job nonetheless, just trying to help out.

kevinsano responds:

yes, that's all true and all, but this still is Toriyama we're talking about.

Based on his designs for Chrono Trigger, Dragonball, Blue Dragon and Dragon Quest, I can tell you that Toriyama couldn't care less about peace signs being generic and shoes being old fashioned... I'm just trying to stay close to the source...

you said yourself that they're typical DBZ shoes, which in that same series seem to look universally the same ACROSS TIME AND SPACE!

[F7]

Eh...

It's nice and all but it doesn't look like art with that fucking window saying Rail Simulator. Take that off and upload it again.

LordMannu responds:

Ok, that is a good advice

[Jason Vorhees sketch]

As a Jason fan this makes me proud.

As a rough sketch this is great I can see him holding a head with his free arm and stuff. You should add a background and stuff is you ever come back to good job.

The only reason I didn't give it a 10 was because it was a rough sketch.